Wow, The effort you must have put into this? Of course I can review it!
Your song reminded me of the times I used to spend relaxing with my friends back where I used to live (even though that wasn't the point of the song). I can only remember it as if I was looking through a cloudy window and I think the filtered vocals helped to emphasize that.
The song is perfect.
Good man, you can relate on any level, the words, the sound - it can speak to various situations. I miss my friends back home a great deal, myself. It's rough out here in the world without 'em. I'm glad you like this. I actually have a track written which is a direct reminiscing of friends, made beats and glitches with some recordings I had did of friends from last year, round this time. Track is called "Humor Me". Don't have it officially released yet. Can hear it on Nueva Forma's website, via my artist page. Just to plug, if you're interested at seeing more of a direct vibe to what you're feeling here.
Like the one you get in your pants after eating a quesadilla? haha jk!
Obviously, I'm going to say it's too short. This is a fun little loop but you need it to be longer with more variation for analysis(to keep it interesting).
The bass is only one note. Change it up! Make it even more interesting. (I'm not talking about the kick drum).
I would've liked to hear a shortened decay time for the reverb on the snare.
I don't wanna work either.
Lyrics are real nice. But they don't match with the beat. I'd suggest using a different style for the beats.
I'm uploading a few song that were meant to be on a mixtape titled 'The Rappers Counter Culture' which never came about due to rocky roads. Thanx for your input on my songs tho, i'm just a hobby mixer so any tips ideas or advice is good with me.
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